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Murphy shot some villains and they dropped not only their weapons. When Murphy found it he knew whose live he saved.


Bodie pistole


Doyle pistole

Date: 2017-07-15 04:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] firlefanzine.livejournal.com
Murphy is a good guy!

Those pictures are very dramatic! Thank you for playing.

Date: 2017-07-15 04:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] macklingirl.livejournal.com
Yes, he is, isn't he?

I've stashed the pictures away for a few years because I found them to dramatic. So I'm happy they are working for you!

Thank you!

Date: 2017-07-15 05:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shooting2kill.livejournal.com
Thank goodness! And you have some very original, good ideas!

Date: 2017-07-15 05:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] macklingirl.livejournal.com
Thank you for the compliment! I'm happy you like my ideas! And thank you for stopping by.

Date: 2017-07-15 05:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cim3745.livejournal.com
Without a reason ? There are two bloody and gorgeous reasons shooting the villians. Well done Murph.
And by the way great idea and great work. Thanks a lot.

Date: 2017-07-15 05:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] macklingirl.livejournal.com
Oh yes, Murphy had a very good reason. I meant I had no special reason to make this post. *g*

And thank you for liking the idea and the work. :-)

Date: 2017-07-15 05:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ali15son.livejournal.com
very nice, thankyou.

Date: 2017-07-15 06:24 pm (UTC)
ext_9226: (snailbones)
From: [identity profile] snailbones.livejournal.com
Go Murphy!

I love the pics, and the idea behind them... Go you too!

Date: 2017-07-15 08:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] macklingirl.livejournal.com
Thank you, you're very welcome! :-)

Date: 2017-07-15 08:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] macklingirl.livejournal.com
Oh, thank you! I'm so glad you love the idea and the pics. :-)

Whose Lives He Saved by Slantedlight

Date: 2017-07-15 11:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] byslantedlight.livejournal.com
He found them bound and gagged, in the furthest back corner of an ancient coal cellar whose door was almost obscured by the wreck of the rooms above. They'd been thrown together, so that they lay close and tangled, Bodie on his back and Doyle's head somehow tucked into Bodie's armpit, the rest of him pressed along Bodie's side, like children curled together at night.

"Like being stuck inside 'is laundry bag," Doyle said later, "Only more fragrant." Bodie raised a disdainful eyebrow at him, and they ambled out of the break room shoulder to shoulder, deliberately casual in the face of a bellow from Cowley's office. Murphy watched them leave, his own eyebrows set carefully low.

He watched them.

Collinson had been paid an arm and a leg for them, and it was only because the men he'd picked to do the dirty work turned out to be no more than amateurs with pretensions that Bodie and Doyle were still alive. Greedy amateurs with pretensions, who'd somehow had the idea that Cowley might pay as much again as Collinson had in ransom money to get his agents back.

Cowley did not pay ransom money.

Murphy could not get it out of his head that Bodie and Doyle knew this.

He saw again and again, in the dark of the night, the clatter of the men ahead of him down the cellar stairs, their last desperate dash, and then the blood that had spattered from the men's bodies, the way their guns had fallen, the photographs of Bodie and Doyle, Cowley's top men, both taken unaware, unknowing, that had fluttered, bloodstained, from the men's fingers.

And Murphy could not get it out of his head that in the silence of the moments after, in the split-second held-breath instant when the shots were still echoing around the cellar walls, bound and gagged as they were on the cellar floor, Bodie and Doyle had turned only to each other, and all they had done was look.

It seared the air between them, that look, and caught in the blaze of it, all Murphy could think was What if I'd missed? What if he'd missed one of the men, if his shot hadn't been clean, had been too late, if his Walther had misfired the second bullet?

What if one of them had closed their eyes then, and never opened them again?

In the dark of the night, his own eyes open wide, Murphy thought about the lives he'd saved, thought about ransom money. He thought about working solo, and playing darts with the lads, and whether he'd ask Janine out on a second date, a pretty, pleasant sort of girl, whose looks held nothing more fiery than warmth.

He thought he would, and the thought lulled him, at last, to sleep.
Edited Date: 2017-07-15 11:40 pm (UTC)

Date: 2017-07-15 11:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] byslantedlight.livejournal.com
Nice pics! Hope you don't mind me borrowing them for inspiration... *g*

RE: Whose Lives He Saved by Slantedlight

Date: 2017-07-16 07:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] macklingirl.livejournal.com
Oh, how wonderful to wake up and find a matching story to my little pictureplay! And what a nice and wonderful story! Thank you very much for it, I love it!

Date: 2017-07-16 07:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] macklingirl.livejournal.com
Thank you! And no, I don't mind you borrowing the pictures for inspiration, instead I'm glad they worked as inspiration for you! *g*

Date: 2017-07-16 09:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] heliophile-oxon.livejournal.com
Excellent - now Murphy can lead the rescue party! *bg*

Date: 2017-07-16 01:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sw33n3y.livejournal.com
Good on Murphy! ..And he got there just in the nick of time, by the looks! :D

Date: 2017-07-16 04:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cloudless-9193.livejournal.com
Very dramatic. Well done! :-)

Date: 2017-07-16 05:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] byslantedlight.livejournal.com
I'm not really sure when I'll have time, but would you mind if I posted the story to my lj or Safehouse or A03 (or all three or some combination), and included your pics as the inspiration? It's only small, but it's the first thing I've written for ages (so thank you)! *g*

Date: 2017-07-16 05:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] macklingirl.livejournal.com
No, I won't mind! Post it were ever you want! I'm glad I could give you some inspiration. And I'm proud if you'll include the pictures! :-)

Date: 2017-07-16 06:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] macklingirl.livejournal.com
Thank you! And I'm sure Murphy will make a good job too with the rescue party! :-)

Date: 2017-07-16 06:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] macklingirl.livejournal.com
Thank you. Yes, it was a very close call this time. But Murphy managed it. :-)

Date: 2017-07-16 06:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] macklingirl.livejournal.com
Thank you very much. :-)

Date: 2017-07-17 01:28 am (UTC)
cyanne: (Pros- Bodie Doyle close)
From: [personal profile] cyanne
I love how creative you are, seeing how to put the pictures together into something dramatic. I always knew there was a reason I liked Murphy. :)

RE: Whose Lives He Saved by Slantedlight

Date: 2017-07-17 01:29 am (UTC)
cyanne: (Pros Bodie Doyle heart)
From: [personal profile] cyanne
This is a lovely story to go with the images, I really like how together the lads are. And Murphy getting to play hero.

RE: Whose Lives He Saved by Slantedlight

Date: 2017-07-17 01:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] byslantedlight.livejournal.com
Thank you! *g* I rather felt like stealing a moment to write a story, and there was [livejournal.com profile] macklingirl for inspiration!

Date: 2017-07-23 07:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] loxleyprince.livejournal.com
Well done, Murphy! :-)

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