German Pros Meeting 2019 - The shortest story ever

[macklingirl]

We played darts for our prompts and my prompts were: deafening, ice cream, nuts, sweat and heaven. And I'm sure I wrote the shortes story in our German Pros Meetings ever.


Ice cream Could be Heaven
by Macklingirl

Doyle lay on his bed, drenched in sweat. As soon as the ice cream hit his nuts he let out a deafening scream, but licking him clean, Bodie felt like he was in heaven.

The End

As always it was fun to play and to write. More later.

Comments

[firlefanzine.livejournal.com]

:-)
No more words necessary!

[hagsrus.livejournal.com]

Heck, could have told us what flavour!

[sunray45.livejournal.com]

Fantastic use of the prompt words. Gave me a laugh out loud moment. Love it.

[firlefanzine.livejournal.com]

I prefer lemon and stracciatella. :-)

[macklingirl.livejournal.com]

That's what I thought. :-)

[macklingirl.livejournal.com]

Nuts ice cream, what else? :-)

But I think he loves strawberry.

[macklingirl.livejournal.com]

I really think it doesn't matter to Bodie as long as it tastes like Doyle in the end. :-)

[macklingirl.livejournal.com]

Thank you very much. Nice to hear you had a laugh out loud moment, because that's what it was meant for. :-)

[freetraveller15.livejournal.com]

Wow! I'm genuinely impressed! Great, and wonderfully concise, use of the prompts! And now I want some ice cream for real! 😅😋

[sw33n3y.livejournal.com]

Bravo! ...And just the thing for a heatwave, I suspect. :D

[macklingirl.livejournal.com]

Thank you very much. Well, it was hot and we had ice cream too, so what else could I do with these prompts? *gg*

[macklingirl.livejournal.com]

Thank you very much. It was fun to make a shorter than short story. And I hope you've got your ice cream. :-)

[cyanne]

You packed a lot into a few words, and I think Doyle would agree. Very nice!

[macklingirl.livejournal.com]

Thank you very much, I'm glad it worked for you. :-)