Prosfic-Bingo - Alpha-fic Challenge Second Go - I

[macklingirl]

I really should finish at least one of my projects. So here is the next story.



I is for In the Course of Action by krisserci5


Well, we have Bodie on holiday and we all know that he will stumble into trouble without Doyle at his side. And that's just what happened. He met with an old acquaintance and this guy gets Bodie into trouble. He asks him to help with some bad guys they both know from their time as mercenaries. And that is when Doyle comes into the game because Bodie decides that he need help.

I like the way the whole story picks up speed more and more until it comes to an end somewhere in Scottland. And I love that the change in their relationship just feels right for both of them. And for the reader too. The story is very well written and maintains the tension from the beginning to the end.

Wordcount: 21551




A is for Angels Unaware by Bardicvoice
B is for Balanced on the Edge of Autumn by merentha13
C is for Careful What You Wish For by gwyneth rhys (gwyneth)
D is for Double or Nothing by tiranog
E is for Easy Prey by jaicen5
F is for Fire Held High and Away by Miriam Heddy
G is for Grapevine by Brenda Antrim
H is for Highway of Regret by merentha13
I is for In the Course of Action by KrisserCI5

Comments

[macklingirl.livejournal.com]

Thank you, I'm happy you think it's a good choice.